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DRAGONTIARNA: VISIONARY editing update

Still editing DRAGONTIARNA: VISIONARY. It’s hard to make pithy status updates on that.

Like, if I say “I wrote 7,000 words today”, that sounds cool.

But saying “I deleted like 30 adverbs and decided that this one line of dialogue should come from Selene instead of Calliande” sounds much less snappy. πŸ™‚

Here’s something that’s more visually impressive. Using ads lets you immediately know whether or not an image is working for the ad. Like, if I start a new ad, and it starts costing $1.50 a click, I know right away that the image isn’t working.

I like this image because it was getting $0.08 a click for a while. πŸ™‚

-JM

3 thoughts on “DRAGONTIARNA: VISIONARY editing update

  • Frederick Ace

    How about this Jonathan, I am a one eyed cyclops whose notorious when I reading will your miss spelling by skimming over the word and going on. No problem for me.
    My wife however reads word for word and will point out my deficiency of not seeing these errors. Mind you it doesn’t bother me, but my wife loves to point out to me the errors. She asks everytime, “doesn’t anyone proofread books anymore?” By the way she just proofread my comments!
    She has read all your books to date except demo soul series starting at the beginning, I told her she would enjoy Mazael.
    So if you want an anal proof reader, Denise is your gal. Just let me know.
    And to end on a high note, Denise has approved my entire comment
    Fred Ace

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  • Frederick Ace

    Thanks Jonathan, I’ll let my wife know,
    Have a wonderful day / weekend
    Fred Ace

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